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Post  True Thug Thompson on Sun Jul 12, 2009 1:13 am

I think the segments should be broken up. Instead of having the sentences together, it would create more hype if things were broken up.

for example, instead of having this:

Fox Trotter: "Well HELLOOOOO!!!! EFW fans, this is FOX TROTTER!!!!!! I'm here tonight with my co-host and partner in crime....JESSICA JUSTICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HEY-OOOOOOOOO!!!!! We have some great matches tonight, and we hope that our first night with you guys will be a blast. Hey Jessica, what is on your mind?!?!?!" -

we could have this:

Fox Trotter: "Well hello EFW fans!!!!!
This is FOX TROTTER!!!!!!
I'm here tonight with my co-host
and partner in crime....
JESSICA JUSTICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HEY-OOOOOOOOO!!!!!
We have some great matches tonight,
and we hope that our first night with you guys will be a blast.
Hey Jessica,
what is on your mind?!?!?!"

and so one.
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Post  Orange Fetus on Sun Jul 12, 2009 3:44 am

No offense, but I don't think that would be a good idea. Just my opinion, but I think having it posted in that style makes it look very unprofessional. I like it the way it is much better.

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